Friday, August 10, 2012

WALT:choose language for effect.

I will put in the box
the swish of a silk sari on a summer night
fire from the nostrils of a chinese dragon,
 the tip of  a tongue touching a tooth.

I will put in the box 
a snowman with a rumbling belly
a sip of the bluest water from Lake 
Lucerne, a leaping spark from an electric fish.

I will put in the box
three violet wishes spoken in Gujarati, the last
joke of ancient uncle and the first smile of a baby.

I will put in the box 
a fifth season and a black sun,
a cowboy on a broomstick and a witch on a white horse.

My box is fashioned 
from ice and gold and steel, 
with stars on the lid and secrets in the corners.
Its hinges are the toe joints of dinosaurs.

I shall surf in my box 
on the great high-rolling breakers 
of the wild Atlantic, then wash ashore
on a yellow beach the colour of the sun.

1 comment:

  1. Kiaora Harold. What an outstanding piece of writing. You have done a terrific job of using language for effect. I particularly like the line ...with stars on the lid and secrets in the corners. Just beautiful!!!

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